Review: No More Words by Kerry Lonsdale

September 13, 2021 Angela Mystery, Reviews

Review: No More Words by Kerry LonsdaleNo More Words by Kerry Lonsdale
Series: No More #1
Published by Lake Union Publishing on July 6, 2021
Pages: 327
Genres: Mystery
three-stars

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From the Amazon Charts and Wall Street Journal bestselling author comes the first book in a trilogy about love, betrayal, and the secrets families keep.

Forced to choose between abortion or adoption, Olivia Carson’s younger sister, Lily, runs away from home. Sixteen and pregnant, she never returns. But she writes. Once a year, Lily mails a picture of her son, Josh, to Olivia until his thirteenth year. Then it’s Josh himself who arrives at Olivia’s house, alone, terrified, and in possession of a notarized declaration from Lily. It begins, “In the event I go missing…”

Josh has difficulty talking. He can’t read or write, but he’s a prolific artist, exhibiting skill beyond his age. His drawings are as detailed as they are horrific. Olivia soon realizes Josh’s artwork tells a story. There’s more to his arrival and to Lily’s untimely disappearance than it seems. Using the drawings as a road map, Olivia traces Josh’s path back to his mom. Each drawing sheds light on Lily’s past and reveals a darkness that forces Olivia to question everything she thought she knew about her family.

No More Words is written in the third person, and admittedly I believe it is a difficult point of view in which to write. In this particular case, I think the story suffers for it. 

Instead of having insights into the main character’s thoughts that might make me sympathetic towards her, I felt detached from Olivia. In truth, I didn’t really like her that much. It made it hard to root for her. Actually, there are very few unlikeable characters.

The beginning of the book intrigued me, but the longer the mystery drags on the less interested I became. By the time I got some solid-ish answers, it felt anti-climactic.

Questions are still left unanswered in the end, but I was ready for the story to be over so I didn’t mind. I just found out that this is book one in a trilogy. A trilogy, ya’ll! I think I’ve read enough though.

 

No More Words is available to read and listen for free in Kindle Unlimited.

three-stars



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